Tuesday, November 8, 2011

Final Draft


In the near future, an estimated one fourth of the world’s population will live in slums. This increase of people living in slums will be due to the predicted increase in world population. A slum is “a run-down area of a city characterized by substandard housing and lacking in security.” Slums have negative effects on the population there due to lack of sanitation, resources, and support from the government. A slum’s sanitation is far from being the best in the world.

Slums have a very horrible sanitation problem where they have to live around filth, which leads to many diseases that many people in slums cannot cure in time. Some say, “Sanitation systems are nearly absent,” meaning that there really is no sanitation system. The quote shows how sanitation systems cannot be found in the slums and they appear to be absent of the area due to the people in the slums living in filth and so much disease that is spreading throughout the slum. Resources are scarce in slums leading to misfortune to those who inhabit them this can lead to starvation and even death.

In slums, resources are very scarce, inhabitants of slums lack many necessary resources such as, medicine, clean water, clean food, and money. "Human waste leaches into the water people drink and contaminates the food they eat. It carries typhoid and other diseases that can be deadly." The resources they have are not the best, which can lead to illnesses, starvation, and poverty. This quote explains why badly needed resources are very rare in slums and why those that aren’t clean can lead to various diseases that could be deadly to a someone who consumes the dirty contaminated food. The government pays little attention to these slums.

The Government does very little, if anything, to take proper care of the slums, they treat the slums as if they were not there, and so, the slums do not receive any help from the government such as getting much needed resources and sanitation. "The Slums are like self-contained cities but they operate with little official recognition or assistance." Slums are there own country, but are not recognized as anything more then just a few dirty houses, but they are still ruled by the government of another country. This Quote explains how the slums are taking care of themselves because they have no government to depend on for help.

A slum is “a run-down area of a city characterized by substandard housing and lacking in security,” and has negative effects on the population there due to lack of sanitation, resources, and support from the government. Lack of sanitation can bring problems to the people living in slums because if nothing is being cleaned diseases will easily spread, lack of resources in slums such as sanitary food and medicine lead to starvation, diseases, and even death. Lack of government support forces slums to have to rule its self , and the slums will not receive needed resources.

Friday, October 28, 2011

Rough Draft


In the near future, an estimated one fourth of the world’s population will live in slums. This increase of people living in slums will be due to the predicted increase in world population. A slum is “a run-down area of a city characterized by substandard housing and lacking in security.” Slums have negative effects on the population there due to lack of sanitation, resources, and support from the government. A slum’s sanitation is far from being the best in the world.

Slums have a very horrible sanitation problem where they have to live around filth, which leads to many diseases that many people in slums cannot cure in time. Some say, “Sanitation systems are nearly absent,” meaning that there really is no sanitation system. The quote shows how sanitation systems cannot be found in the slums and they appear to be absent of the area due to the people in the slums living in filth and so much disease that is spreading throughout the slum. Resources are scarce in slums leading to misfortune to those who inhabit them this can lead to starvation and even death.

In slums, resources are very scarce, inhabitants of slums lack many necessary resources such as, medicine, clean water, clean food, and money. "Human waste leaches into the water people drink and contaminates the food they eat. It carries typhoid and other diseases that can be deadly." The resources they have are not the best, which can lead to illnesses, starvation, and poverty. This quote explains why badly needed resources are very rare in slums and why those that aren’t clean can lead to various diseases that could be deadly to a someone who consumes the dirty contaminated food. The government pays little attention to these slums.

The Government does very little, if anything, to take proper care of the slums, they treat the slums as if they were not there, and so, the slums do not receive any help from the government such as getting much needed resources and sanitation. "The Slums are like self-contained cities but they operate with little official recognition or assistance." Slums are there own country, but are not recognized as anything more then just a few dirty houses, but they are still ruled by the government of another country. This Quote explains how the slums are taking care of themselves because they have no government to depend on for help.

A slum is “a run-down area of a city characterized by substandard housing and lacking in security,” and has negative effects on the population there due to lack of sanitation, resources, and support from the government. Lack of sanitation can bring problems to the people living in slums because if nothing is being cleaned diseases will easily spread, lack of resources in slums such as sanitary food and medicine lead to starvation, diseases, and even death. Lack of government support forces slums to have to rule its self , and the slums will not receive needed resources.

Sunday, October 23, 2011

Introductory Paragraph


All around the world, no matter where you go, there is bound to be a slum there.  Slums are unsanitary cities that are far too overcrowded not just by people, but also by filth, these places struggle to get proper resources needed to live such as clean water, medicine, and proper nutrition. Slums have a negative effect on the human population there due to lack of sanitation, resources, and support from the government. Slums’ sanitation is far from the best in the world.

Monday, October 17, 2011

Outline


1. Introduction
A. The run-down areas surrounded in filth, are known as slums, and are such disgusting places to live.
B. Slums are unsanitary cities that are overpopulated not just by human beings,but by filth, these unsanitary places struggle for proper resources to live such as clean water, proper nutrition, and medicine.
C. Slums are overpopulated and run-down areas that have negative effects on the population there due to lack of sanitation, resources, and support from the government.
D. Slums' sanitation is not nearly the best in the world.

2. Defendable point #1
A. Slums have a very horrible sanitation problem where they have to live around filth which leads to many diseases which many can't cure at time.
B.
i. "Sanitation systems are nearly absent"
ii. Sanitation in the slums since they are absent cannot be found.
C. The quote shows how Sanitation systems cannot be found in the slums and they appear to be absent of the area due to the people in the slums living in filth and so much disease going around.
D. Resources are scarce in slums leading to misfortune to those who inhabit the area, which can lead to starvation.

3.Defendable point #2
A. In slums, resources are very scarce; they lack many resources such as, medicine, clean water, sanitary food, and money.
B.
i. "Human waste leaches into the water people drink and contaminates the food they eat. It carries typhoid and other diseases that can be deadly"
ii. The resources they have are not the best, which can lead to illnesses, starvation, and poverty
C. This quote explains why resources, that are clean, are very Scarce in the slums and why those that aren’t clean can lead to various diseases that could be deadly to a human
D. Now explaining how the government has affect toward the slums.

4.Defendable point #3
A. The Government does not take proper care of the slums; they treat them as if they were not there which leads the slums to not receiving any help from the government such as getting resources sent to them
B.
i. "The Slums are like self-contained cities but they operate with little official recognition or assistance"
ii. Slums are there own country, but are not recognized as anything, but they are still ruled by the government of another country
C. This Quote explains how the slums are taking care of themselves as if they had no government to take care of them to begin with
D. This Concludes how Slums lack the support needed from the government, now in conclusion

5. Conclusion
A. That Concludes My Defending Points toward what problems Slums may have
B. Slums are overpopulated areas that have negative effects on the population there due to sanitation, lack of resources, and Lack of support from the Government
C. Sanitation can bring problems to the Humans in Slums due to nothing being clean attracting infections, Lacking Resources in slums, could be the fact that they have no sanitary food or clean water which could give the body infections, No Government support makes the slums self-ruled and having no help at all from the government, such as receiving resources to help
D. The Only question left to answer is what can be done to help.

Wednesday, October 12, 2011

Alex's Thesis Statement

A slum is a run-down area of a city characterized by substandard housing and lacking in security, people living here have no choice but to drink dirty water, live in small quarters, and receive little medical care.